This was what it looked like after some work at home. I added more color and some darks to the orange persimmon. I glazed some orange and red over the shadow of the orange persimmon taking the color out into the background. I added some green to the tops of the persimmon as well as some shadows. I removed the masking of the pornage persimmon (after everything was dry).
I added some red and orange to the shadow under the yellow persimmon. I added more shadows to the yellow persimmon. I added more color and shadows to the orange persimmon and worked in the masking fluid on the left side. I worked on the green part adding more shadowsshadows. I also started adding some textural lines to the orange persimmon.